"Come back to bed," she whispered
Softly to the wind,
"My heart grows cool without you,
As the light between us dims.”
“Come soon, my love, remember
How I burned for your caress?
Before the flames expire
And our passion’s repossessed.”
“The time grows late,” she pleaded
Though resigned now to the chill,
She sunk beneath the covers
Where he found her cold and still.
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21 comments:
Sounds like Zombie Love to me!!
Fantastic Felicitas...
Oh Yeah..
I nailed You FIRST Tonight....
Again!!!
YAHTZEE....Baby!!!
Lovley post
great poem.
Hot drama!
Brilliant!
a very powerful poem.
a chiiling end...smiles. is anything sadder than a cold bed...
oh my this could have fit into my last blog
I see the love in everything
oh my, a chilling rhyme! Very well done!
it may be cold, but its still love. lovely!
It's interesting ... after reading your poem my eyes were drawn to your "Out of Balance" post. Your Magpie became even more meaningful.
So very Poe-ish! I love it!
Some guys just don't get it. Steamy to the icy ending.
Haven't been here for awhile. My apologies. I see I've missed some marvelous posts - like this one.
I married one of those!
Seriously though, this is a beautiful idea in an interesting poem.
'Before the flames expire
And our passion’s repossessed.'
A sad end to passion
Thanks for coming by One Stop Poetry
Moon Smiles
This is eerie!
so sad, and so beautifully written!
thank you for stopping by and commenting on my blog home. i always enjoy hearing from you.
smiles,
Wonderful rhythmic poem filled with passion and longing.
Oh this is so cool!
So inviting
So positive and welcome- compared with the other (all so good too) ones.
Great magpie!
;)
Felicitas,
wow, and I am seeing it and feeling it.
you write beautifully.
I hope your relationships appreciate it!
Dianne
Felicitas,
wow, and I am seeing it and feeling it.
you write beautifully.
I hope your relationships appreciate it!
Dianne
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