Somewhere,
Across this great expanse
You are.
I feel you,
The way I have always felt you,
From the core of my being.
Though we have never met
On this side of the veil
Your essence
Is imprinted upon my soul.
And I ache
For the time we’ll be together
Beyond my dreams
Once more.
55 Flash Fiction Friday: Compose a story in 55 words and report back
to the G-Man at http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/ …every Friday.
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33 comments:
Oooooo Felicitas ~ I LOVE this today. The photograph is just so intriguing too. Such beauty being able to combine the two with such poetic words. Mesmerizing!
My 55 is up (though it's a "66" today ~ I granted myself an exception):
Friday Flash 55 ~ Butterfly Kisses
this was lovely, as is your blogsite! every word you spoke went straight into my heart for, i too, am a searcher. thank you for sharing your 55 with us!
oh i have felt that ache...and i hope it passes quickly and you are together again. nice 55.
mine is up!
YES! I feel it too...
I read this in a deeply spiritual way. It is beautiful. Mine is up as well, but it isn't spiritual at all.
Emotional and spiritual, both at once.
Lovely.
What a powerful post. It makes me want to rush across the continent to give you a huge hug.
a very powerful and lovely post.
I think I bomb out this week...oh please don't laugh...
here
Happy Friday!
Happy Mother's Day!
hugs
shakira
Wonderful my friend. A feeling that sometimes never goes away. Mine is up HERE. Have a great Friday :)
"Though we have never met on this side of the veil..."
Such longing, such agony. So well done.
Sometimes the recognition of another is so strong.
This is really, really gorgeous!
I feel you too,
vivid and empowering words.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/07/family-friday-special-happy-mother-day-family-first-award/
Family first Award,
Happy Mother's Day!
your stuff always make me think what a beautiful writer you are. Great 55 as always.
Thank you, Karis! I thought the image was cool, too. It's from Deviantart which has alot of beautuful artwork for download and sale. But the photographs you post - which I know you take yourself - are ALWAYS really lovely as well.
Hi Sheri, thank you and welcome. This piece definitely came from my heart.
Chris, you're right - this is also a very spiritual piece.
MM, I can feel you too - thanks for the hug!
Happy Mother's Day to you too Shakira - and all the other great moms here! Hope your kids spoil you this weekend!
So lovely. Well said.
This is very lovely and may I add that the picture is very cool, too!
this sings to me today more then you will ever know.
simple and beautifully put...
xoxo
It will find you when it is time. It took me 44 years.
Happy Mother's Day,my friend!
You look BEAUTIFUL, then and NOW!
You are such a wonderful friend and MOTHER!
May this Mother's Day be one of the best with more to come in years!
YOU ROCK, MOMMY!
hugs
shakira
beautiful poem I like it and I thank you for stopping by and leaving comments.
love your poetry.
Beautiful, mysterious and evocative. Tres romantic:)
Wow!! I love everything about your blog. The page is filled with sensual images and your poem is a wonderfully passionate piece. Fantastic.
Intriguing image and enchanting words...definitely enjoyed this piece.
Felicitas, you are one of the reasons I love the Poetry Pantry. This poem is nothing but gorgeous. It is at once hopeful and killingly melancholy. I have felt just this way so often. Thank you for putting this feeling into words.
FB
How beautiful!
Pamela
Believe it or not, Sherry Blue Sky used two words that I WAS going to use. "Beautiful" and "mysterious." Great minds think alike, I guess. Kind of reminds me of Enya songs.
This poem is one of mystery and yearning. Beautiful!
old piece,
thus I believe that you are well now.
beautiful sentiments.
well penned.
Your words exude absolute love.....
Beautiful....
Eileen
Terrific write here. I think everyone can relate to this. Love and Light, Sender
This is truly beautiful! i love it!! :-)
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