When the nights are coldest,
I feel for your presence.
At the loneliest of moments,
I breathe in your essence.
When the days are darkest,
I dream of your face.
Across the expanse of earth,
I reach for your embrace.
For we are connected,
By body and soul.
In coming together,
Our spirits are whole.
Join in the fun: Compose a short story in 55 words and report back
to the G-Man at http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/ …every Friday.
19 comments:
Beautiful, touching words.
wow, you've outdone yourself, this is THE BEST!
what a wonderful 55. it feels so different with that one...i found mine.
and my 55 is up!
Felicity...
Somewhere on this planet there is One Lucky Bastard!
Very sensual 55 My Dear.
Thank You for this beautiful contribution, and have a Kick Ass Week End...G
This is my kind of poem. It speaks to my inner self. I love it. Thanks for this 55.
PG
shame shame shame There should be more comments to this post than just five. Wish I could write those kind of words like you do.
You must no what those words do when there whispered in a mans ear it gets them all shakie inside and and well i won't go any further with it I'm sure you know what I mean...winks at YOU and SMILES a really big toothless smile for you LOL
Thanks for dropping by This Blog Of Mine and leaving a comment glad you liked my fifty five also.
Larry.
I Vote for you
That kind of whole must be very beautiful indeed.
This is just heartwarming and so peaceful. I love it. Great 55 my friend. Have a wonderful weekend :)
Wonderful. I love the soulmate thing, and you do it well.
So moving and touching. You are always a treat to read. Thank you. And thank you for all your visits. I am honored.
That was freakin' brilliant! Just Brilliant!!
So, so beautiful, Felicitas. You have written a perfect 10 on this topic. We should all be so lucky!
Thanks for stopping by to read my 55 and taking the time to comment. :)
Yours is just beautiful and having found my soul mate the words just hit the spot!
I was following you but was not!
Sorry for fot coming to visit before
Thanks for coming by and...
THIS IS SO GOOOOOD!!!
I love your poems, dear Feli
HOLY COW! (Just a favorite saying!) A blog like yours, and I've never been here. Found you on "The Wizard of Otin"...
You have made poetry I can live with, read, understand and enjoy.
Thank you for
sharing your work,
baring your soul
Only recently have I "discovered" (uncovered) a love for poetry, through these blog post--so many poets on here now! Wonderful!
This feels so peaceful to me. Lovely!
Thank you all for the truly wonderful comments - they mean the world to me! I write from my heart, and to know that there are people who appreciate what I do is priceless!
This was beautiful. I can tell you went to your soul for this one.
this is awesome! I love it.
Post a Comment