Friday, January 8, 2010

Soulmates



When the nights are coldest,
I feel for your presence.

At the loneliest of moments,
I breathe in your essence.

When the days are darkest,
I dream of your face.

Across the expanse of earth,
I reach for your embrace.

For we are connected,
By body and soul.

In coming together,
Our spirits are whole.


Join in the fun: Compose a short story in 55 words and report back
to the G-Man at http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/ …every Friday.



19 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Beautiful, touching words.

Shadow said...

wow, you've outdone yourself, this is THE BEST!

Brian Miller said...

what a wonderful 55. it feels so different with that one...i found mine.

and my 55 is up!

G-Man said...

Felicity...
Somewhere on this planet there is One Lucky Bastard!
Very sensual 55 My Dear.
Thank You for this beautiful contribution, and have a Kick Ass Week End...G

Prayer Girl said...

This is my kind of poem. It speaks to my inner self. I love it. Thanks for this 55.

PG

Larry said...

shame shame shame There should be more comments to this post than just five. Wish I could write those kind of words like you do.
You must no what those words do when there whispered in a mans ear it gets them all shakie inside and and well i won't go any further with it I'm sure you know what I mean...winks at YOU and SMILES a really big toothless smile for you LOL
Thanks for dropping by This Blog Of Mine and leaving a comment glad you liked my fifty five also.
Larry.


I Vote for you

SandyCarlson said...

That kind of whole must be very beautiful indeed.

Thom said...

This is just heartwarming and so peaceful. I love it. Great 55 my friend. Have a wonderful weekend :)

Alice Audrey said...

Wonderful. I love the soulmate thing, and you do it well.

Monkey Man said...

So moving and touching. You are always a treat to read. Thank you. And thank you for all your visits. I am honored.

otin said...

That was freakin' brilliant! Just Brilliant!!

Kathleen said...

So, so beautiful, Felicitas. You have written a perfect 10 on this topic. We should all be so lucky!

Akelamalu said...

Thanks for stopping by to read my 55 and taking the time to comment. :)

Yours is just beautiful and having found my soul mate the words just hit the spot!

Dulce said...

I was following you but was not!
Sorry for fot coming to visit before
Thanks for coming by and...

THIS IS SO GOOOOOD!!!

I love your poems, dear Feli

Steve E said...

HOLY COW! (Just a favorite saying!) A blog like yours, and I've never been here. Found you on "The Wizard of Otin"...

You have made poetry I can live with, read, understand and enjoy.

Thank you for
sharing your work,
baring your soul

Only recently have I "discovered" (uncovered) a love for poetry, through these blog post--so many poets on here now! Wonderful!

Mama Zen said...

This feels so peaceful to me. Lovely!

Felicitas said...

Thank you all for the truly wonderful comments - they mean the world to me! I write from my heart, and to know that there are people who appreciate what I do is priceless!

schererart said...

This was beautiful. I can tell you went to your soul for this one.

for I am so many things.. said...

this is awesome! I love it.