Thursday, January 28, 2010

The Key

What views do you hold,
Which paths do you follow,
Are you buffered by love,
Or broken and hollow?

Do you blow with the wind,
Stand where you will,
Are you true to yourself,
Or resentful and ill?

You alone have the power,
To choose what’s right,
Make passion your muse,
Watch spirit take flight.


55 Flash Fiction Friday: Compose a story in 55 words and report back
to the G-Man at http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/ …every Friday.

22 comments:

Peter Stone said...

Great 55 - have to stop and think. Good message too, we don't have to let life carry us away, we can make choices that count.

anthonynorth said...

This one flowed beautifully. Excellently done.

Roxy said...

Oh Felicitas, you just have what it takes to create an absolutely perfect 55! I love this! Beautiful, beautiful ;)

Susan said...

This had perfect flow. It is easier to let life blow us away. While it may be hard, the difficulty of following your passion is well worth it!

Thanks for visiting mine which was right HERE

Brian Miller said...

great message today and wonderful 55. it is a choice we make each and every day.

my 55 is up!

G-Man said...

Felicitas...
You just blow me away every Friday!
You always have a way to make one think in a positive way.
Beautifull 55 My Dear.
Thank You for this excellent contribution, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Mama Zen said...

Beautiful!

Alice Audrey said...

Well said!

Susan at Stony River said...

I loved this one. A lot of truth and running as beautifully as a song.

Realliveman said...

Nice 55!

Prayer Girl said...

A very lovely 55. Thank you.

PG

Alexys Fairfield said...

Hi Felicitas,

Very nice poetry. I love the power and simplicity of it. Great photo too.

Dianne said...

I love the love poem. Just in time for today, or Feb 14th. Making passion my muse is what I believe in! Thanks for visiting my site. have a great weekend.

otin said...

Rings very true for my life at the moment! Wise words that you wrote here!

Emerging From The Fire said...

Wow. Great 55. I love this one!

tattytiara said...

Good questions.

CordieB. said...

So wise...Make passion your muse, watch spirit take flight. Love this poem. Thanks for creating and sharing!

C.

schererart said...

Beautiful. Great message in only 55 words.

Kathy M. said...

Hi. Great 55. I visited you via Roxy. I've read the last few posts and really enjoyed them. Terrific blog. I'm glad I found you.

Prayer Girl said...

A second comment because I want to welcome you to my blog as a follower. This makes me very happy.

God bless,
PG

Dulce said...

the exact words I need, my friend
Thank you so much for your sweet support
Big hug Back!

Felicitas said...

Kathy - I really enjoyed your blog as well. I'll be back to visit soon!

PG - I'm only too happy to follow you... you are wonderfully creative and inspirational. Such a joy to read!

Dulce - You're awesome!

To all my other friends who commented - Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Your comments really make my day : )