Thursday, February 11, 2010

Forever Valentine

I have loved you
Since the very moment
I first learned
Of your existence.

Upon your arrival,
So eagerly anticipated,
An instant connection
Of body and soul.

Once in my arms,
So strong and steady
Your precious heart
Beat with mine.

My child, my love,
On this and every day,
You are my 
Forever Valentine.
55 Flash Fiction Friday: Compose a story in 55 words and report back

to the G-Man at http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/ …every Friday.

20 comments:

Susan said...

That was beautiful.
I’m up right HERE

Monkey Man said...

This so touches me. The words and the photos. Great. Just Great. My 55 is HERE.

Tall Kay said...

You have touched my heart. Our children are our forever valentines (and then we get blessed with grandchildren) and the love just keeps growing!

Ronda Laveen said...

Loving words. Exquiste, soulful pictures. A valentine forever. Great job.

Peter Stone said...

I've often wondered what it feels like to have a little life growing within you, to have and hold nine months later - and you've shed light so wonderfully on that issue.

My 55 is here

RNSANE said...

This is a most beautiful valentine and a perfect flash 55!

anthonynorth said...

Beautiful and touching. A lovely 55.

You'll find mine here.

Maha said...

I absolutely loved it!

Hootin' Anni said...

Melts my heart this 55!!!

My 55 "I Want No Flowers on My Grave".

[scroll below my show n tell as always]

Happy Valentine's Day Weekend!

Brian Miller said...

aw, that was beautiful. i love kids. sweet 55!

mine is up!

Chef Kar said...

Children are indeed the sweetest Valentine's we are gifted. Loving (and missing) each and every one of mine this year. I love the photos you've added today. Thank you for the warmth.

I'm up here:
Friday Flash 55 ~ The Gift

g-man said...

Awwww...
What a sweet Valentine 55!
Every parent completely knows where you are coming from on this one.
You certainly can tug on a Heart Baby. Thank You for playing today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Dulce said...

This is THE SWEETEST love of them ALL!

Great , beautiful and - again- sweet as always ...dear Fel
Thank you!
;)

schererart said...

This was very heartwarming. The itty-bitty foot makes me think back to the birth of my two sons. Lovely post.

otin said...

Very tender! I loved it!

Mama Zen said...

I totally love this!

Megan "JoyGirl!" Bord said...

Beautiful (and I love the gentle music that plays on your site every time I stop by).

Happy Valentine's Day!

Mona said...

That is the sweetest valentine ever! I love the foot photo!

Felicitas said...

Thank you, everyone! Once you've known love for a child, everything else really does pale.

Happy Valentine's Day to all my blogging friends!

PattiKen said...

What a lovely expression of motherhood!